Simona -
Excellent reporting and excellent narrative. Your piece really sheds light on something many people would never think about or even know existed. The structure of the article is sound and I think the quotes are well selected. I think the piece could use a little bit more of scene though. Besides that, I think the technical aspect of the piece, the writing itself, like I said, is already really good. I’m really interested in a description of one of these camps if you can find one!
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